Excellent! I'm sure there are plenty of novels on the market with a similar plot, too...
So is there another step to this quest?lol, very good.
@Catherine -- This story has far more problems than plot: point of view is all over the place, floating body parts, a clueless hero. All that in less than 150 words. I do like the heroine's dialog, though, which leads me to Tam's comment. @Tam -- "Is there another step to this quest?" Apparently not, since another step in the quest chain would have advanced the plot. :P
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